Jeez, that's amazing. Seriously, there's nothing I can say that's negative. Except maybe work on the spacing after the commas, heh.
"A gentle touch and an endless hug, never to fill that pain for it is love."
Has to be my favorite line. Is there a reason touch is capitalized? Love it man, keep up the great work. Can't wait to read more from you. If you ever need a crit or anything you let me know.
~Corvin Vandra
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